Make me a smile
I will adorn a face
Be a part of the joy
And add to its grace
Make me the peace
That prevails after a strife
Make me the seed
Of genesis of life
Make me a child’s toy
I will witness his smile
The innocent expressions
In his eyes agile
Make me the thunder
Announcing the rains
Make me a raindrop
That washes off the pains
Make me a firefly
That orchestrates the show
Twinkles beneath the night sky
Spreading its glow
Make me the emotions
That flow out as tears
Make me the belief
That drives out the fears
Make me the soothing song
A comrade who walks along
The seeker of right and wrong
Walking alone on a path too long
Oh! Make me the life
Forever I shall fly
And never shall be dead
Before the day I die
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Dear Readers… With this poem, I seek your leave…. Exams ahead… So shall be busy for a few weeks… Meet you in the second week of December… 🙂
Random Thoughts 
November 11, 2013 at 2:00 pm
Reblogged this on Champagne & Gossip and commented:
I Love this! I’m starting my Monday morning nice and positive 🙂 SMILE!
November 11, 2013 at 2:34 pm
Thank you so much… Glad that you liked it 🙂
November 11, 2013 at 2:35 pm
Yes I loved it 🙂 x
November 11, 2013 at 4:09 pm
Oh Such beautiful pure emotions and I love the flow……..
Make me Arindam Saha, The great
Let me absorb his positivity straight
Let me get his intelligence and grace
Till I fall in my brother’s embrace
It may sound funny but Please get the message I want to tell not the words 😛 Love you.
November 11, 2013 at 4:48 pm
🙂 Nice poem btw… Dheere dheere tu bhi seekh rahi hai response poetry 😛
Aaja… ban ja Arindam Saha… Mera kya jaata hai… 😛
Aur waise… main koi great nahin hoon… Main to bus… Main hoon… Tera bhai 🙂
Meri positivity le le… Apna innocence de de… bus aur kuchh nahin chhahiye…
Thanks for the appreciation 🙂
November 12, 2013 at 5:43 pm
Awww yehi tu ker rahi hun aesta aesta… tu ne kafi kuch sikha dia hai. aur me innocent tu koi nae hun … Bara samajdaar bana dia hai haalaat ne 🙂 Per ullu zaroor ho jati hun kabi kabi.
November 13, 2013 at 6:52 am
Ullu?… Not bad… 😛 Pichhle janam mein ‘transformers’ mein se ek thi kya? (I hope you know of transformers… cartoon wala)
November 14, 2013 at 4:22 pm
Haha Nae yaar I don’t know 😛 Movie ki baat ker ray ho ? Nae daikhi mene 😦
November 14, 2013 at 4:29 pm
transformers are ‘things’ that can change forms… aur usme to tu maahir hai… pendulum…. zombie… ullu etc. 😛
November 14, 2013 at 4:31 pm
Hahaha Okay okaay Me insaan e hun bus likhtay huay kuch aur cheezain ban jati hun kabi kabi 😛
November 14, 2013 at 4:51 pm
Oh… I didn’t know that… I thought tu ‘andar se zombie hai… khoonkhaar’ 😛
November 14, 2013 at 7:11 pm
Lol na na choti c masoom bachi hun me tu 😛 😛
November 15, 2013 at 7:12 am
Woh to hai hi… 🙂
Waise… I was trying to collect all my response poetries (as many as I can remember…) in one place…
Yeh dekh le… https://whenintrovertspeaks.wordpress.com/response-poetry/
So I wanted to ask that ismein tere blog ki bhi poetries daal doon kya?… After all mera response poetries ka largest collection to tere paas hai 😉
If you agree… then I will post them after my exams…
What say?
November 15, 2013 at 7:46 pm
Araaay han han han ye b koi pochnay ki baat hai 😛 Teri apni poetry hai jab merzi le jahan se merzi le. And I love your idea of collecting all of your response poetry….Baray baray master pieces hain teray aise bikhray huay 😉 Ikatha ker le 🙂
November 15, 2013 at 9:53 pm
Haan… ikatha ker leta hoon… pataa nahin kab saath chhoot jaye aur ‘tere’ woh master pieces kho jaayen 😛
November 16, 2013 at 8:32 pm
Meray master pieces kabi nae ho saktay …. Me tu bongian marti hun bus.
November 11, 2013 at 4:35 pm
Very Beautiful and Lovely Lines Arindam.. 😀
And Good Luck with your Exams,All the Best and Do Well.. 😀
November 11, 2013 at 4:54 pm
Thanks 🙂
November 11, 2013 at 7:04 pm
Lovely words..and best wishes for your exams. 🙂
November 11, 2013 at 7:58 pm
Thanks 🙂
November 11, 2013 at 8:41 pm
Oops… Sorry! 😛
November 11, 2013 at 8:43 pm
haha yes. BIG mistake!
November 11, 2013 at 8:45 pm
I am SO sorry…
November 11, 2013 at 8:46 pm
I should accept it, I know. Like you always do. But I don’t feel like accepting apologies today. 😛 😉 Maybe another Bengali fish would work. 🙂
November 11, 2013 at 9:31 pm
Achchha… To yahaan par bhi ghoos… OK chalo…
Presenting a dish of prawn… “Chingri Maachher Malai Curry…”
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November 11, 2013 at 10:15 pm
haha thank you thank you! Bohat awesome. 🙂 “Chingri Maachher Malai Curry” Wow.
November 12, 2013 at 11:53 am
How truly beautiful! Hugs from Oz, Paula xx
November 12, 2013 at 1:46 pm
Thanks a lot!
November 15, 2013 at 5:01 pm
WOW TRULY I LOVED THE RHYTHM 🙂
Make me a child’s toy
I will witness his smile
The innocent expressions
In his eyes agile
…rESPOnSE…
Make me a good friend
who wipe the tears
brightens every second
with it’s lovely care
Make me a river
that flows and sounds
that stops never
by filling the wounds
Make me the king
who rules but with honesty
holds every swing
and never leaves his duty
Make me a smile
that shines on every lip
With power of removing miles
that lasts a forever tip
Make me a butterfly
that flies and spreads beauty
with graceful colors of sky
that should always be called a sweety 🙂
Make me just a helpful hand
that should assist every guy
should never be bad
and should never say bye!!
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November 15, 2013 at 5:08 pm
I am speechless! Stunned and bewildered… Awesome yaar… This is one of the most beautiful gifts I have ever recieved… Wonderful!
November 17, 2013 at 9:51 am
Thank you and glad that you liked it 🙂
November 17, 2013 at 3:46 pm
You are welcome 🙂
November 17, 2013 at 5:44 pm
🙂
November 18, 2013 at 6:52 am
Wonderful….and your words make me smile….Thank you….
Take care…You Matter….
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maryrose
November 18, 2013 at 7:02 am
Thanks for the appreciation
November 18, 2013 at 7:03 am
you’re very welocome…
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maryrose
November 27, 2013 at 1:53 pm
what a beautiful, beautiful wish!
November 27, 2013 at 2:03 pm
Thanks a lot 🙂
January 24, 2014 at 9:22 pm
Make me poetic like Arindam 😛
Lol
❤ it 🙂 Mesmerized as always
February 11, 2014 at 5:00 am
Awesome! 🙂
February 11, 2014 at 10:36 pm
Thank you 🙂